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Love you forever

Broken-hearted still alive
Pulsing thoughts anger
Tears flowing cheeks red
Why does love hurt?

Shattered scattered hopes
Dull shine like raw diamonds
Without you nothing exists
Where did I go wrong?

Time slowly slips away
Everything swirls inside
Carnival ride nausea
I just wanted to hold you

Body lays quiet and still
No will to breathe
Blackness envelops all
Why do I always wake up?
©2003-2010 ~tasteslikebrning
:icontasteslikebrning:

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An older piece I never got around to submitting.

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:iconralasterphecy:
Raw emotion, and potent language!

"Why does love hurt?" Indeed!

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:icontasteslikebrning:
Thanks! :heart:

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:iconralasterphecy:
YW...:D

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:iconsadisticfreek:
It's very good. Glad you finally got around to submitting it, 'cause it's great. :) take care.

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severed...
by the jagged knife you hold
Butchered...
And I just watched on...

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